My revision strategy is that I need to make my thesis more easily placed and worded so that people will understand what is my thesis. Also under the conversation heading for the checklist I put a maybe for providing context for my quotes and if they paraphrase what the paragraph is saying. So I need to work better on explaining what my quotes mean and how they go with my ideas. In the writer as driver heading it talks about using synthesis and I wasn’t totally sure if I used it correctly in my paper so when I edit everything for my final draft I will make sure that I am using that correctly and it make sense. In the conclusion there is a thing that I could fix, I could introduce mt new idea more easily, because I did introduce something new that wasn’t from any of my sources but I think the way I did it could’ve been better so I will fix that. The last thing is clarity, most of my paragraphs and sentences are well written but there are some that were worded strangely so I have to go back and rewrite those.